主题:那位英语好的帮帮忙 -- 面壁
It's been a year daddy.
I really really miss you!
Mommy says - now,
And a beautiful place called heaven.
We have your favorite dinner tonight,
I eat it all a lot!
Even though I don't like carrots.
I learn hard this one summer,
I can even open my eyes when I'm under water.
Can do you see me?
I start a kindergarten this year,
I'm carrying a picture of us in my -punch box.
You are the greatest dady!
I can spring on this swing by myself,
Even though I miss you pushing me.
Can do you see me?
I miss how you used to tickle me.
Tickle my belly.
My belly hurts.
I try not to cry,
You might be say it's OK,
I know you don't like it when I cry,
Never wanna me -
I try to - you, but it hurts.
It's that true you are not coming home?
Maybe some day, I can visit you in heaven, OK?
- to go bed now,
I see for a while now, just in case you come home, then kiss me good night.
I love you so much!
I miss you daddy!
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请 ------------------- 1 觉昌安塔克世 字1009 2005-12-18 22:03:20
好感谢 面壁 字0 2005-12-19 14:55:39
🙂英语真的是好,不由得不大为羡慕啊! 文心 字150 2005-12-19 02:30:22
在韦前辈的基础上增加了一点点。还请众高手继续补充。
谢谢回复 面壁 字0 2005-12-19 14:57:57
😥别介,俺还年纪轻着呢,咋成前辈咧!? 韦红雪 字18 2005-12-19 00:08:06
三人行必有我师嘛,韦老师不必客气啦 1 文心 字28 2005-12-19 01:31:18
😁那什么,共勉,共勉... 韦红雪 字0 2005-12-19 01:35:14