主题：俺的英文履历书，求河里大侠指教，十万火急！！ -- simplyred

俺的英文履历书，明天就要发出去，第一次写，可定有不足之处，求大侠指教。

purchaser

Area Vendor Manager

Crane Engineer

Hydraulic/Electric Designers

Mechanical Designers

Service Engineers Apply before:

Japan

基本上就这几个，购买可能还有销售和企画，说明会上发的一张简介掉了，后来打电话问了差不多就这些。俺经营工学背景，求的便是这些purchase avm文科的东东。

下面是简历，人名住址省略。请大侠们看看有没有错别字和文法错误，还有请问我写的这个Purchase affairs or business development position可以cover公司的求人范围吗？

OBJECTIVE:

Purchase affairs or business development position where my academic knowledge, cross-cultural experiences, team facilitation, enthusiasm, language skills, and advanced technical skills will be continually challenged.

SKILLS:

 Well-conceived

 Work well with a multi-cultural and diverse work force

 Eager to learn and build upon my knowledge and experiences

 Achievement-oriented, ambitious, and adaptable

 Innovative and resourceful

 Ability to prioritize and meet deadlines

 Effective in a team environment as well as with minimum supervision

 Proficient in Windows (OS, Word, Excel, PowerPoint, )

 Trilingual-Japanese, Chinese, English(be used mainly in academic research and translate, and now study for TOEIC test)

EDUCATION:

Apri.2005 to Mar.2007　 。。。。 University, 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Cumulative GPA: 3.8　　　　　　

Apri.2001 to Mar.2005 。。。。, Bachelor of Commerce - Major in Management　　　　　　　　　Cumulative GPA: 3.3

RELATED WORK EXPERIENCE:

还在想，主要是强调在学校TA和在NHK新闻部工作的经历

respond quickly to emergencies　 deal with emergency situations　ability to respond appropriately in emergency situations

HONORS&AWARDS

 Presentation of master's thesis in Japan Industrial Management Association Tuohoku Branch Meeting For Research Papers 2007

 MEXT(Ministry of Education, Culture, Sports, Science, and Technology) Honors Scholarship 2004 and 2006

REFERENCES:

Available upon request